Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Anecdotes 3

My dad came over here to have a family and support us when he had my brother and I. He came walking and in a car. When my dad first came here he was in LA,but decided to go more up north to find a better job. He First started has a baker at a bakery by the airport. Then he worked at a hotel called Marriot. After he found my mom some were,had my brother and I. He went to college here and got his GED in electric engineering. Since that day on he has been there for the family.
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  1. CwiteeeenloveSeptember 13, 2009 at 10:01 PM

    I really like how he work his way up. He must be extremely hard working. It's nice having someone being always there. He also be caring.

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  2. ThompsonSeptember 18, 2009 at 7:23 AM

    I'm looking for specific anecdotes, Joaquin- and most of what you've got here are general descriptions of your dad's life. Instead of telling me "he came walking and in a car," show me that with a story that describes a moment, or a series of moments, in his journey. The only thing that separates your dad's story from thousands of others is the details, and the details are up to you to provide.

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